Sunday, January 08, 2006

Shikayat..

Tere hi hontho ne hume muskurana sikha diya,
varna in gamo se hume shikayat na hoti
Mohabbat ne teri hume tanha rahna sikha diya,
varna yeh akelepan se hume shikayat na hoti

Tere bahon ke sahare ne hume sambhalna sikha diya,
varna en larkarathi kadamonse hume shikayat na hoti
Maut mujhe aati nahin,bin tere ab jiya jaata nahi
Tum zindagi mein hote toh zindagi se hume shikayat na hoti

Bin tere har khushi se ab shikayat rahti hai,
ghar saath tera ho toh maut se bi hume shikayat na hoti
yaad hume tum karte nahi aur tujhe hum bhula sakte nahi,
Na milata khuda hume toh us se hume shikayat na hoti

11 Comments:

Blogger Arti Honrao said...

Whenever I read something on ur blog I become so emotional that a voice screams from within asking me to write something and if you check my reply to most of ur posts, I have replied in a nazm.
because -
"The aching heart cries aloud, tears trickle down the neck of the pen and a heart felt poetry is born..."

Shikayat na hai tujhse koi
Khud se hi shikayat hai
Tune kab kaha tha kuch
Parr maine hi sunn liya ke tujhe mujhse muhobbat hai
Ab to sunte rehte hain harr pal
Jab bhi dil shikayat karta hai
Shikayat hai mujhe meri aankhon se
Ek aansu bhi nahi chalakta
parr dil to harr waqt rota rehta hai


Arti

6:05 pm  
Blogger ESIH said...

very very beautiful use of words...and an awesome creation..

12:04 am  
Blogger Akruti said...

"yaad hume tum karte nahi aur tujhe hum bhula sakte nahi,
Na milata khuda hume toh us se hume shikayat na hoti"

Aapne tho aankhon mein aansoon ladiye apni kavita se:)

12:08 am  
Blogger Emotions said...

U knw wat?

i hv been wondering since three days abt wat to write as a comment to this SHIKAYAT of urs bt nothing in my mind.......

breathtaking creation.....

good going:))

keep writing n keep smiling:))

11:45 am  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Poetry is the best form of expression, this gets proved by most of your posts.. :)

12:40 am  
Blogger Tarni said...

Shikayat ker ke tujhse khud ko tanha kiya,
tanha ker ke khud ko hum tarapne lage,
shikayan na kerte to pataa nahi chalta shayad,
kub hum jaage or kub pyaar kerne lage!


Regards
Tarni

3:54 am  
Blogger Manish said...

Very nice jottin down of thoughts to words.....

12:47 am  
Blogger Fursat said...

hey lovely and touching lines..really nice one :)

faasle aise bhi honge yeh socha na tha
woh mere saamne betha tha aur mera na tha...

I didnt write it and but loved it :)

Thank you so much for being at my blog and leaving your comment :)

GOd bless u !

11:32 am  
Blogger Kaunquest said...

Amrit, khuub farmaaya :)

2:03 pm  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice.

4:01 pm  
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